Thursday, April 30, 2020

Senryu 10 - Life Of Fishermen Comments

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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 27 February 2023

I love this brilliant, yet short poem bravo! ! ! !

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Thank you very much dear Lee. The pain of survival is hard to witness

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 February 2023

A brilliant sketch of the life of a fisherman in its utter brevity.... appreciated.5 stars and to my favourites!

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Thank you very much dear Dr.Dillip. I think it's worthy to remind the society about the hardships of fishermen

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Three brilliant lines that vividly depict the life of a fisherman especially when he is out there in the ocean without nothing except his boat, skill and God. So beautifully written and conveyed.

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Thank you very much dear poetess.Poor folk! they are always exploited. I feel sympathy for them too

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 April 2020

just swim at the surface no sun will burn no water will you churn nor any fish will you ern stay calm and cool CARONA WILL NOT BE ABLE TO SEE YOU WE ALL LOVE TO FISH FO A LOVELY DISH KISH TO START WITH O LOVER POET YOU PROVE TO BE PLAY WITH THE SUN ERE IT SETS AND YOU FINALLY WITH T SET

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Thank you very much dear poet for the instant response. While fishing gives pleasure professional one especially in adverse climate is dangerous

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 April 2020

A brilliant there liner sir! Appreciated the underlying philosophy embodied in this precise write...10++++

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Thank you very much dear Dr. Dillip. I was anxious to see your poems and comments. Thanks a lot you have survived everything. Here, only a few is concerned over the stress and strains the toiling lot

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