Senryu # 10 Comments

make kingship noise into self. Human beings living in illusion. tony

Meaningful write....enjoyed it.....thank u.....anjandev roy.

differently touches this poem nice

make kingship noise into self, ..... so that each one can know right and wrong and judge, well written, thanks for sharing the poem with us here in a,10

Some thinking they are drinking liquor and they don't know liquor is also drinking them. Funny but thoufghtful as well.

World is you; you're world.........when wine drinks man. A beautiful humorous poem shared amazingly.10

Well penned sentry on self wold, thanks for sharing the poem with us,10

Once I read the first two words I knew I would like this senryu. But it is a very serious write with a noble theme. We are all kings within ourselves.

World is you and you are world......... hallucinations, real imaginations, and man's escape into an inrreal world but a world which he himself wished.- very good graphic dear Mahtab.. thank u for this poem. tony