Senryu # 10 Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Senryu # 10

Rating: 4.7


drink liquor calmly
make kingship noise into self
World is you; you're world


-July 25,2018 Chattogram

Senryu # 10
Wednesday, July 25, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: drinking,humorous,life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
From my comment on Unstarking The Day - Poem by Frank Davis, Sr.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 25 July 2018

World is you and you are world......... hallucinations, real imaginations, and man's escape into an inrreal world but a world which he himself wished.- very good graphic dear Mahtab.. thank u for this poem. tony

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Captain Cur 26 July 2018

Once I read the first two words I knew I would like this senryu. But it is a very serious write with a noble theme. We are all kings within ourselves.

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Muzahidul Reza 26 July 2018

Well penned sentry on self wold, thanks for sharing the poem with us,10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 July 2018

World is you; you're world.........when wine drinks man. A beautiful humorous poem shared amazingly.10

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 August 2020

make kingship noise into self. Human beings living in illusion. tony

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Anjandev Roy 04 August 2020

Meaningful write....enjoyed it.....thank u.....anjandev roy.

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Britte Ninad 15 August 2018

differently touches this poem nice

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Muzahidul Reza 12 August 2018

make kingship noise into self, ..... so that each one can know right and wrong and judge, well written, thanks for sharing the poem with us here in a,10

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Akhtar Jawad 08 August 2018

Some thinking they are drinking liquor and they don't know liquor is also drinking them. Funny but thoufghtful as well.

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