Senryu 1 (Bicycling In Pairs) Comments

Like it...good thumbnail image. Young Mormons, doing their service, travel in pairs here too. They don't ride bikes though, San Francisco's too hilly. One of my favorite scholar/adventurers, Sir Richard Burton, after translating Kama Sutra and Scheherazade, attempting to find the source of the Nile, and many other impressive things, made his way to the Americas in the 1800's to make an anthropological study of the life style and customs of the Mormons in Utah. Your haiku is a good study.

Nice piece with deep sense,10++