Senryu # 05 Comments

Chain and strain! ! ! ! ! Same with the frame. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Yes- sometime some worthless praising befalls every good wisdom

Another brilliant senryu. So very true. Very perceptive piece of work.10

Thoughtful write. Your Senryu made me think what should I comment for this beautiful write. Pen had nothing to do with the words yet its the writings, the thoughts make a difference. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing!

You are a thoughtful young man.

Though there is no venom in pen yet the words from it suffocate the brain. An impressive philosophical write is nicely shared.

A thought that cannot be denied.