Seneryu Series- My Prism Comments

Very beautifully penned. The picture seems to have truly reflected in the lines. Keep it up.

Heavy downpour! ! ! ! Rain from the heavens! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Varsha, Congrats for selecting the apt pictures for the fine senryu

This fits in the category of Senryu not a haiku. Haiku is about nature and Senryu is about humans and nature.There are so many forms like Sonoku, Monoku, Trioku. Haiku originated as an opening part of a larger Japanese poem called renga. These haiku written as an opening stanza were known as hokku and over time writers began to write them as their own stand-alone poems. Haiku was given its current name by the Japanese writer Masaoka Shiki at the end of the 19th century.[3]