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Send Me Away Comments

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Send me away to a fonder place
Where children laugh and play
Where sky blue and cloudless be
Always shining on my face.
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L MILTON HANKINS
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Soran M. H 07 September 2020

Send me away to a fonder place Where memories of days gone by Are caught in the rapture of yesteryear, In the warmness of your fond embrace.

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Soran M. H 07 September 2020

this lovely Quatrain, well penned and rhymed, meanwhile the imagery and meaning are so unique and fantastic, the fantasy and reality are mixing to pass the great message of the poet and reach the utopia world and touching face, leaving the readers to answer 2 important Q: 1.who is sending? 2' who is face with a big 10+ for this masterpiece of work

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