The sound of running water
galvanizes the wound I endure
Since we met
No remedy could heal my injury
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Excellent selections of the words Good work too. Tks Rgds Nooruddeen
I get the feeling that your love is, as yet, unrequited. Oh - to have a muse - how it hurts, how it makes us pour forth our very souls.
a wonderful passionated write, with a mysterious beautiful feeling.. I just do love your unique verses Suliman, , , , , , , , , , , ,
Intrinsically, I secure Intransigently, I adore Rachel Ann Butler
Wow! Excellent style and carefully chosen words make this selection of words memorable. you'll be remembered through your writing one day when you're gone, something I wish for myself one day.
I just read this again...and feel very uncomfortable about the word 'manure'....is there anything you could do to revise this line? Rgds,
uh well, i cant say its good...actually its......amazing! fantastic!
From: Rachel Ann Butler (Bury St Edmunds Ireland; Female; 89) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 7/26/2009 7: 52: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Send me a Love Now this is more my kind of work I enjoy..you are talented and have great pnmanship... I will read it again... I voted 10 on the page. Best RAB
From: Ulveena Aitzaz (Pakistan ;) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 7/24/2009 6: 16: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: RE: Send Me A Love Your poems have always been sweet and touching. And so is this. Best, Ulveena Aitzaz
The more I read, the wider my smile became. Beautifully written. I loved it. I wish my love would write me something like this! *sigh*
it can show an anguish that in ur heart lives... so sad poem. well written,10