Monday, July 6, 2009

* Send Me A Love * Comments

Rating: 4.6

The sound of running water
galvanizes the wound I endure
Since we met
No remedy could heal my injury
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
COMMENTS
Emma Adamyan 29 November 2009

it can show an anguish that in ur heart lives... so sad poem. well written,10

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Rachel Butler 10 October 2009

Intransigently, I adore Rachel Ann Butler

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Nooruddeen Mm 08 October 2009

Excellent selections of the words Good work too. Tks Rgds Nooruddeen

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Agnes Parker 02 October 2009

I get the feeling that your love is, as yet, unrequited. Oh - to have a muse - how it hurts, how it makes us pour forth our very souls.

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Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate 24 September 2009

a wonderful passionated write, with a mysterious beautiful feeling.. I just do love your unique verses Suliman, , , , , , , , , , , ,

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Rachel Butler 20 September 2009

Intrinsically, I secure Intransigently, I adore Rachel Ann Butler

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Wow! Excellent style and carefully chosen words make this selection of words memorable. you'll be remembered through your writing one day when you're gone, something I wish for myself one day.

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Appleblossoms 2009 07 August 2009

I just read this again...and feel very uncomfortable about the word 'manure'....is there anything you could do to revise this line? Rgds,

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Rafique Farooqi 06 August 2009

it is a top job Suiliman.. well done

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Miran Mohammed 28 July 2009

uh well, i cant say its good...actually its......amazing! fantastic!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 26 July 2009

From: Rachel Ann Butler (Bury St Edmunds Ireland; Female; 89) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 7/26/2009 7: 52: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Send me a Love Now this is more my kind of work I enjoy..you are talented and have great pnmanship... I will read it again... I voted 10 on the page. Best RAB

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 24 July 2009

From: Ulveena Aitzaz (Pakistan ;) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 7/24/2009 6: 16: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: RE: Send Me A Love Your poems have always been sweet and touching. And so is this. Best, Ulveena Aitzaz

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Black & White Right 20 July 2009

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Iman Djalloul 20 July 2009

The more I read, the wider my smile became. Beautifully written. I loved it. I wish my love would write me something like this! *sigh*

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Dorcas J Kimosop 17 July 2009

that is so lovely........

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lovely, ....sends you a love!

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Candace Johnson 16 July 2009

beautiful....moving..... passionate

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Rafique Farooqi 14 July 2009

very beautiful poem.......

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The Dreamer 13 July 2009

very nice - thank you for sharing

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Broken Heart 12 July 2009

vry nice! ! i reeaally reallly liked it! !

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