Thursday, January 5, 2012

Semolina And Tropical Sand Comments

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This morn saw me rise in time
to see the lemon coloured sun begin to climb;
gentle companions early in the day
were a multicoloured sky and clouds of palest grey.
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Sylvia Lukeman
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Nancy M. Godfrey 07 February 2012

The imagery is truly delicate and beautiful! ! You took me right there with you. Kudos! ! !

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 07 January 2012

You have beautiful word friend. Your poem is lovely.

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Wahab Abdul 05 January 2012

this is a good poem indeed..i like it very much..keep it up...please read my new poem..'how did they dare? '

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