Friday, October 20, 2006

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My dream is a hundred dollar dress,
Perfect shoes, fancy jewelry, and you.
What I get is a fifteen dollar dress,
Practical shoes, decent jewelry, and no one.
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Liz Hope
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Melvina Germain 20 October 2006

You'll be just fine Liz, be patient. Good way to show your inner thoughts. Keep writing, it's goof for the soul, good poem Liz.-------Melvina

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Liz Hope

Liz Hope

Fort Wayne, IN
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