Beautiful brown eyes filled with sorrow,
Perfectly full lips set to a frown.
Her once glorious world is now burning down.
Heart peirced with agony from the fall,
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A good poem with a couple of forced rhymes, but over all very good. Don't forget to read as much of other's poetry as you can. That is the way to hone your skill. Read mine - A Writer's Dilemma -
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A good poem with a couple of forced rhymes, but over all very good. Don't forget to read as much of other's poetry as you can. That is the way to hone your skill. Read mine - A Writer's Dilemma - Adeline