Saturday, July 2, 2011

Selfish Pleasures Comments

Rating: 5.0

My hands turn to ice,
with your body around me.
Kissing my cheek,
all the way down my neck.
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Dakota Ellerton
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 02 July 2011

It was a marvellous poem written with great skill and wisdom. Great imagery and a fine style. Liked and rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4.

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