Selfish But Learning Comments
Be patient....
I'm still learning.
Like a little child,
Still growing.
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wow! fine composition! fine ending! small verse ecstatic! ........10+
This is a wonderful poem. I liked the way it flowed and it's contnuity. Great Job.
the message within the poem is quite strong, but there are places that you leave us hanging where it seems to be missing a syllable and doesn't read as smoothly as it could, either way it earns a 9 Timothy
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7/25/2025 7:33:20 PM # 1.0.0
A nice poem with lovely ending.