Selfie..An Addiction.. Comments

I liked the idea behind your poem, and I am sure you have read either an article or wikipedia to get details about the 'history' of selfie.. The American Psychiatric Association has indeed not really listed it as a mental disorder though, selfie addiction can be seen rather as one of signs of a person with high narcissm.. The 'selfist' thing was a hoax created by Adobo Chronicles - a satire site that writes 'fake' news! ! ! ____ Now a few things- * The past participle of 'spread' is 'spread'.. It is an irregular verb.. * In the line- 'No matters where they are, they are just taking selfie' It should be 'no matter', not 'matters'... * In the lines - 'The greatest addition nowadays is of selfie' 'addition' or 'addiction'? ? ? Both can work, I guess with different meaning to the lines... * The lines - 'The new model of smartphone have the named prefix and suffix with selfie' There are a couple of things, a) 'smartphone' or 'smartphones'? ? You are talking about all 'smartphones' and not just one, right? ? b) It would be better if you used the 'prefix' and 'suffix' as verbs.. So the line should be - 'The new models of smartphones have the name prefixed and suffixed with selfie' In my limited knowledge, I feel you should make these essential changes to the poem, to 'fix' it.. The thought is noble Abhilasha, the execution naïve.. Fix the execution and you have a wonderful poet, even in English, within you: -)

Selfie is the new age addiction.Nice portrayal of the craze. If you find time please read my poem on the same topic.

It's a beautiful take on the growing addiction.. Reminds me f a recent events whr a couple took a selfie with d burning burj Khalifa building Well penned Abhilasha :)