Selfie Comments

Beautiful, atlast the poet is settled with his own name and earns a recognition in the society to live by herself in her changed address. Loved reading.

well written poem. Truly captures the vivid imagery being painted

I came across with this poem in Bri Showcase. This is a wonderful poem emanating from a delicate poetic heart! You have put it in a very realist manner. Loved the expression: ‘To capture/Who are /With me at the moment/As the moment/Will slip away/In the next moment/It will be past”. Thanks for sharing!

Thank you Bri Edwards for putting this poem in your February Showcase.It is my honor to get my poems in your Showcase.

i'm about to put the poem into the newly-submitted February showcase. Thanks! bri ;)

i now see that i left a comment in march 2017 and said some of the same as i said in my comment today. you, Bharati, say this is one of YOUR favorites. mine too, and it now goes to MyPoemList and in line to enter February's showcase in a few weeks. thanks. but even without photos, you have memories. my mate/wife puts some favorite 'pics' on her PC monitor as screensavers. bri ;)

i've never had a camera with which i could take photos of things i could not see! maybe things i did not notice/was not looking at. truly, photography is a sensational tool for entertainment and science etc. especially for etc. :) i guess the poem went from reality to a bit of symbolism, which is ok. (to be continued) ....

To capture your image along with the sorroundings like tree, temple, palace, blue waves of sea, dancing of the flower, flying of the birds, cool moon, motherland with green grass through selfie is interesting. Dear Bharati madam, you have nicely and touchingly painted this scenery through your lovely pen. Each and every line is interesting to read more and moreover. Let me quote some lines here.... I selfie To capture my image Capture with me My loved ones My surroundings The tree, temple, palace and sea ********************************* I want to capture with me The blue waves of the sea The waves that rise and fall With my emotions ******************************* Everything I love Seen and unseen And wait to see and hold All the blessings of God. Beautiful poem nicely crafted. Enjoyed. Thanks.

I like selfie with self admist nature's bounty. Although I like odia poems more than those in other languages. Your English poems touch me more better picturized. Honestly I liked them.

that will be a magical camera if it can hold all of that, especially this: Everything I love Seen and unseen And wait to see and hold All the blessings of God. favorite lines: I want to capture The beauty of the birds Who fly making a 'V' sign under the clouds so dark bri ;)

to capture Who are With me at the moment As the moment will slip away In the next moment It will be past. Beautiful, ............

Selfie is about pics...poetry is about the emotion associated with feelings........you have balanced this two in your amazing lines...

Really a beautiful poem capturing the beauty of nature by taking selfie with them....liked it...thank u for sharing :)

You have put across the 'selfie' moment quite beautifully. Thanks. I am tempted to quote: As the moment / will slip away / In the next moment / It will be past /....And wait to see and hold / All the blessings of God.

blessings of god is always with you and you share your motions through wonderful words