Self-Reflection, Emptiness Comments

Well written, but some of the words in last verse maybe lost in translation, i like the tight verse and the ideas flowing through, but the last piece a bit confusing.We all come to crossroads in our lives, and we don't always make the right choices, but learning from our mistakes helps us to grow in knowledge and maturity.

an interesting and a great write, nicely done from start to finish,

Self-reflection reflected quiet well through the writing. Sometimes feel smart, sometimes feel nearing to truth and sometimes get myself confused while reading. First two lines of the last stanza quiet poor by its conception. Buy is not the word goes with the spirit of the writing. Poet should have to be much accurate to put the appropriate word....It's strictly my own opinion, not a manifesto. Thank you.

A beautiful poem in self reflection. like a tombstone so repentance presented not as a sign but as a marker- Love the lines!