Sunday, October 27, 2013

Self Realization Comments

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Do
The sky knows
What is wide?
Do
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Roseann Shawiak 07 November 2013

Like the thoughts behind the poem, it just seems repetitious. Maybe combine some of it to make it's meaning clearer. 'Does the ocean know what depth is, or the mountain know the meaning of it's height.' Maybe something along those lines. Good thoughts, keep writing, the more you write the clearer your poetry will become. Like this one. Thank you for sharing. Thank you for your comment on my poem: Life Came Dancing, I appreciate it very much. RoseAnn

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Marvin Brato 27 October 2013

Indeed...self-realization is the best pleasure we can ever experience!

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