Wednesday, October 18, 2006

Self Portrait Comments

Rating: 5.0

A laugh to cover the anger,
A smile to hide the pain.
Sorrow falling upon me,
Like frigid drops of rain.
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Josephine Adrian
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Jerry Hughes 15 April 2007

...Jo, you most certainly had a rotten start to your young life, but reading between your lines you're bigger that all that, and I wish you well. Warmly, Jerry

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Scott Austin 20 October 2006

Your self portrait is showing that you are a very well determined young lady that has the ability to overcome any obstacle that is placed in front of her. I commend you young lady for your strength and courage to strive to do your best no matter what ever is said. May peace and joy fill your heart each and everyday. Scott

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Joshua Fegley 18 October 2006

A very oppressive and depressing poem Josephine. But then so is life, I emphasize with you Josephine on a daily basis. Laters.....Joshua

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Marvin Brato 18 October 2006

Very good one Jo, I like gals who is strongwilled and know what to do in life. Are you free? Take my 10, you deserved it.

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Josephine Adrian

Josephine Adrian

Victoria, BC
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