Saturday, December 20, 2008

Self Pity Comments

Rating: 4.8

Drudge yourself in hard work,
Satisfy thirst in your sweat,
You are coward, you are poor too,
I can see depth of unhappiness for you,
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Tara Chettur
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Mayur Soni 29 December 2008

ya its bitter but true, expression are perfect but hopefully new year will bring some cheers in world.

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Sameer Ahmed 23 December 2008

You have expressed this factual dilemma of people very rightly......to be practical one should have to lift the blinds of self-pity considering the message conveyed in this poem..........Liked your thoughful poem...... absolute 10/10

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