Tuesday, April 14, 2009

Self-Inflicted Insanity Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why have things become like this
So many watery, painful tears
And blackened, sad hearts
In the youngest of souls
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Britney Hogue
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Terry Finch 20 April 2009

This had more of a prose feel to it. As far as the message goes, there is some very deep thought going on here and it is a good statement on general well being of society today. I think everyone should take a long look at the way things were when Woody Guthrie was alive. We've come a long way but then we haven't really.

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Delicate Heart 18 April 2009

A swaying piece, that one become lost whilst reading it, very tender poem.

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Kranthi Pothineni 16 April 2009

Beautiful theam. Nicely written... meaningful. Good.

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Eyan Desir 16 April 2009

Good write good work keep writting

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Indira Babbellapati 15 April 2009

we are a global community and in community living one's happiness invariably depends on others' happiness n it's for us to make other happy...well written, young lady!

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 14 April 2009

a self inflicted masterpiece this is =) great job my good friend

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 14 April 2009

It’s all self-inflicted insanity By our laziness and self centeredness Learn how to live the right way For someone other than ourselves And pain would surly ease And life would seek less poverty. Yes, much incompetence lies within us. Self centeredness is more or less like psychiatric disorder. We should learn to live for others as well. Most of the problems of the world can be resolved by doing so. Best Wishes Naseer

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we have not realised the problem...not yet...being natural would solve a lot and it should'nt be hard

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~ Jon London ~ 14 April 2009

All problems start with us, and will definately die along with us. We live in a world that boils with frustration

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~ Jon London ~ 14 April 2009

All problems start with us, and will definately die along with us. We live in a world that boils with frustration

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Britney Hogue 14 April 2009

love your poem you write well and you write the truth to day is full of how much can i get not give sunshine carol

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