Monday, January 29, 2018

Self-Improve Comments

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I think I've found a way for minding fusion
My mind's mixed with fierce intensity
At max density because nothing in
Life comes easy desire is my
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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 February 2018

THREE: But remember, IF you don´t improve the mistakes then that´s no self-improve. Smart people like you wants to go move forward with their life and we can do that ourselves as the best. I have really enjoyed the metaphors used here, thank you for sharing this brilliant poem. A 10 and much much more, Laqory!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 February 2018

TWO: he prologue about the intensity of your character has been described violently, but with perfect similarities and metaphors. I was thinking that you do mathematics, no? But, you have created a perfect poem, describing your character and as a smart young man, you know what to do.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 February 2018

ONE: Life is just like that, Just that is my honesty. At the end if you do not have anyone as a good example, you ultimately know the best thing you have to do to get yourself balanced in life. You have enough knowledge yourself to draw strength from it. As I have read you know as the best what kind of person you are and what you need.

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 January 2018

Minding fusion! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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