Self Hatred Comments

Sarah Very nice poem. On the other hand you need to expand a little bit and add few lines. The poem ends suddenly.

I liked this poem a lot. Sarah. It is a wonderful illustration of the fact that positive results can and do often come from very negative situations. We learn and grow from our mistakes and bad choices. Well penned indeed. A 10 from me. Thanks Richard

we pass through experiences in life, , one should make them memorable any ways, , , , , , life's not so simplei believe, , , and i loved reading this great wrute, , a 10

Yes, what strengths we gain when we rise from the ashes, perhaps, the best education we can get - and this is well written. I'll save it and go give you my 10

excellent stuff! ! ! You put your soul into it.

A well- structured analysis of recompense.

Indeed..we should still grow despite the lack of nourishments in our soul.. This introspection..self discovering..and I thought of my poem Autobiography..quite same here..revealing oneself..you can read on it... This poem is great..A 10++!

A great poem and a contemplation of thoughts..the superego prevailed vs the id... as implied.. nice write...10

Your poetry is very good, as we all do in our writing we discover self, find reasoning, learn and grow even in the bad times we go through.....10

WOW! Really i should tell you this is one wise write....its pretty difficult to see through bad days and find a ray of hope.yes but we can live through it.....to reach the gates of hope in the heart of a hidden tomorrow.

awesome work........well the poem is small but the meanings it holds inside it is really big........man ur better than shakesphere: P or wateva his name is XD

Pretty awesome piece......you're moving forward in excel acceleration.keep up the good works sarah!

great read...it sounds like a good lesson learned..