Tuesday, December 4, 2012

Self Harm Comments

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Fires ablaze within my heart,
a smile consealing all my lies,
screaming, begging, calling out,
a final, frantic, desperate shout.
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alicia tschantre
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Josiah Decker 04 December 2012

Beautiful, just beautiful. I struggle with chemical addiction and self harm issues myself, so I somewhat know how you feel. But again, beautiful.

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Connor Whyte 04 December 2012

Such pain and intensity to this poem its sad to see that you feel to hurt yourself you don't need to there are others that can relate find someone close and be with them until you feel safe, This is so very sad but it is full of so much power that it makes this poem a great one. Very good write I am super impressed. Read my poem the hidden truth I think it can relate to the way you feel sometimes and has some answer to it.

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Lidia Schaffer 04 December 2012

this is so sad and i hope you dont really feel that way in real life thats all i have to say but good poem! ! ! Lidia

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