Wednesday, July 4, 2018

Self Discovery Comments

Rating: 4.2

I was young when I went off
to find myself, without you
to find myself
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Vincent LeVine
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Mahtab Bangalee 07 July 2018

excellently finding self at the end of everything from nothing- down deep inside there was Love... I found Myself. excellent writings

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Vincent Levine 08 July 2018

Thanks Mahtab! For a lot of us there is only one search- truth of self. Find it and you are truly rich!

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Irfanulla Shariff 07 July 2018

Very well described. Great poem!

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 July 2018

down deep inside there was Love. what a great realization...... yes when we are young we dont think much. but later our hearts are full of wisdom......... love and love and love.. that alone has meaning.. tony

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 July 2018

'When I drive by our old home I could cry, times we've had the things we've shared'.. old memory sometimes hurts. Very nice. Enjoyed.

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Glen Kappy 07 July 2018

My first time reading something by you, Vincent. I like the simplicity of this and the flow and visual shape. And you affirmed in love what is most important of all. I’m interested to read other poems by you. -GK

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Vincent Levine 08 July 2018

Thanks Glen! I appreciate your insight.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 July 2018

Such an excellent piece, Vincent...10++++

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Vincent Levine 08 July 2018

Thanks Bernard! Glad you enjoyed it!

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Ruta Mohapatra 07 July 2018

So well composed! There is a tinge of sadness, a sense of loss poignantly expressed!

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Vincent Levine 08 July 2018

There is a tinge of sadness, a sense of loss poignantly expressed! - Absolutely! Thanks for reading Ruta!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 July 2018

And in the end nothing's found that wasn't already there down deep inside there was Love... I found Myself.....touching expression. Beautiful poem shared. Congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day. ......

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Vincent Levine 08 July 2018

Thank you Kumarmani!

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Robert Murray Smith 07 July 2018

This poem, although put in this category, should be regarded as the begining of your poetic journey. In truth, it is far from the standard one would expect. I rated it three.

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Gajanan Mishra 04 July 2018

In the end nothing found, great

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Comment 07 July 2018

As a senior poet on this site you should be ashamed with this stupid comment. Just chasing points is pointless.

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Vincent LeVine

Vincent LeVine

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