I was young when I went off
to find myself, without you
to find myself
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down deep inside there was Love. what a great realization...... yes when we are young we dont think much. but later our hearts are full of wisdom......... love and love and love.. that alone has meaning.. tony
'When I drive by our old home I could cry, times we've had the things we've shared'.. old memory sometimes hurts. Very nice. Enjoyed.
My first time reading something by you, Vincent. I like the simplicity of this and the flow and visual shape. And you affirmed in love what is most important of all. I’m interested to read other poems by you. -GK
So well composed! There is a tinge of sadness, a sense of loss poignantly expressed!
There is a tinge of sadness, a sense of loss poignantly expressed! - Absolutely! Thanks for reading Ruta!
And in the end nothing's found that wasn't already there down deep inside there was Love... I found Myself.....touching expression. Beautiful poem shared. Congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day. ......
This poem, although put in this category, should be regarded as the begining of your poetic journey. In truth, it is far from the standard one would expect. I rated it three.
As a senior poet on this site you should be ashamed with this stupid comment. Just chasing points is pointless.
excellently finding self at the end of everything from nothing- down deep inside there was Love... I found Myself. excellent writings
Thanks Mahtab! For a lot of us there is only one search- truth of self. Find it and you are truly rich!