Monday, August 14, 2006

Self-Determination Comments

Rating: 4.0

I will spring the closing trap
And jump the disappearing train
Shaking loose the dust of time
And distortions from my brain
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Frank Bana
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Ernestine Northover 14 August 2006

This is a very moving write Frank. A beautifully written poem wonderfully woven with enchanting words. A delight to read. Excellent. Love Ernestine XXX

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