Friday, May 2, 2008

Self Determination Comments

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I heard the bullets ricochet
and prayed that none would come my way
We were deployed to keep the peace,
but sneak attacks will never cease.
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ivor or ivor.e hogg
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 16 May 2008

i agreed with you ivor.just leave it to the native to decide what's good for them. nice write bro!

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Alison Cassidy 03 May 2008

Your sentiments, I applaud, your poem expresses them with grace and truthfulness. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Ernestine Northover 02 May 2008

Excellent Ivor. Great flow and mastery here, very impressive read. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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