Wednesday, April 4, 2012

Self Destruction Comments

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Not even the rain
can wash away
The stain of mankind
and the hate and destruction
...
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Dave Alan Walker
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Sally Plumb Plumb 14 April 2012

Good piece.

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Unwritten Soul 09 April 2012

A few bold lines to hold in mind, my bro remember only innocent is a universal solvent for human problem...yes it can stain blood by other to down us but when only we turn innocent we back the free of pain..because for innocent person nothing can be hurt so much and there always way to move...and it is true it's a true for us to think about this...take care_Unwritten Soul

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Eric Cockrell 08 April 2012

we're running out of time! good question for us all!

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Marites C. Cayetano 05 April 2012

a sad reality... nice poem, thanks for sharing.

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Nice poem.it astonishes me how even a small poem can convey such a powerful message.this poem reminds me of J. Robert Oppenheimer speech.

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G.R. Gaus 04 April 2012

I can relate to this one, as most of my work leads down this similar road, will we ever learn INDEED!

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