Wednesday, August 20, 2008

Self Control Comments

Rating: 2.7

Once again the desires
From deep down the heart
As extension of the body
In dripping juices from the tip
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Kesav Easwaran 21 August 2008

a thought provoking poem...the second stanza is profoundly heavy...good work, Sadiq 10/10

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Indira Babbellapati 20 August 2008

very lucid in detail...i concur with u, sadiq...

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