Thursday, August 24, 2017

Self-Control Comments

Rating: 5.0

Percy had just finished eating.
He was doubled over in pain.
But anyone who had just eaten 4 Double Whoppers with extra onion.
Would have more gas than a jumbo airplane.
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Lamar Cole
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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 August 2017

A beautiful humorous poem on self contol has been painted nicely. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

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Jeanette Telusma 26 August 2017

Self-Control is so vital, Lamar. Thanks for sharing this.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 August 2017

Humility and kindness. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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The Crow 25 August 2017

This one made me hungry. Thanks alot Lamar, now I need to go gas up. Good One.10

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Rini Shibu 24 August 2017

Haha. Good sense of humor Self control is mastering in everything

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