Sunday, March 20, 2016

Self Centered Brother Comments

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Self centered greedy brother
Least done to his siblings
Looked at father as a demon.
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v.m.saraswathy munuswamy
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Edward Kofi Louis 20 March 2016

Greed is not what we need in life. Thanks for sharing.

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Thanks for the review, life is to care and share our happiness with others atleast with kith and kin, love you, thanks again

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Wonderful and outcome of truth by the poet

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Realism. Brought forward in the eyes of public.

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Thank you dear keep reading and write, hope this us a good platform to get inner peace, welcome to this journey

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Jacson Gelato 20 March 2016

Your poem is truthful to the core. Often brothers are misguided by their wives. It usually happens when laypeople are unaware of the law. But it is also essential not to misjudge the wives who are good though evil resides in the mind of the son's of the house itself. He is self centered because of his own family misunderstanding him or depriving him. Mutual Respect is the victory banner of every household to make it a good home.

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Though he is Self centered, regardless to siblings feelings, my heart bleeds to see his pitiable condition, sacrificed his self for a selfish woman who now lives with another man exploiting the innocence and weaknesses of a man, thanks to give wonderful comments, take care

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