Tuesday, October 31, 2017

Self-Burial Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am already slipping out of my control;
Already tranced; already dreaming;

And haven't even gotten into bed
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Troy Cochran
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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2017

Envisioning a new and better Real is wise ever and this is interesting. While people blurry someone this is so sad and life gives fleeing of dead is thought provoking. A hundred trivialities rush and petty doubts and worries surround. Autumn comes and goes giving many promises. Brilliant and excellent poem is well penned.10

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Fog Runner 01 November 2017

A hundred trivialities rush at me, The petty doubts and worries beady minds are prey to. I am out of tolerance for these I adore what I have just read - WELL DONE.

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Sochukwu Ivye 31 October 2017

This is a piece of glad tidings of a great victory. Resurrection in other news. Bravo to the human form once drowned, once buried, once concealed, etc. but now on an elegant move to an elevated stage. Congratulations.

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