Sunday, February 23, 2014

Selecting Relaxation Techniques Comments

Rating: 5.0

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s.zaynab kamoonpury
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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 October 2019

in the aromatic incenses of oils and essential oils Bathe in breathtaking joy......amusing expression. A beautiful poem is so nicely and incisively delineated. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

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Richard Wlodarski 30 December 2017

A truly stunning meditation piece. A feast for the senses. And closing with meditating on Oneness is divine. Excellent write. Thoroughly enjoyed (and meditated on) every line. Thank you so much for the wonderful experience. A Perfect 10!

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Yash Shinde 08 April 2014

...........a soothing piece..............I can smell the lavender scent, and feel the rose petals......lovely write..........

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Bri Edwards 28 March 2014

hey S., i saw this poem mentioned in your comment to '20 little angels'. i wonder what artificial tranquilizers are. have you thought about opening a spa? ? ? sounds like you have some good ideas here. thanks for sharing. bri ;)

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Ibrar Siddiqi 11 March 2014

Quite good. Excellent.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 27 February 2014

A fine poem of pattern type where the river of life drips down and flows on in to spiritual unification.Very inspiring.

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Kristian Lorenzen 27 February 2014

A splendid poem! ! K.

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Carly Kisley 26 February 2014

Very well written. Love the details. Imagery is always my favorite. well done. =D

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Shahzia Batool 25 February 2014

Zaynub, stay grateful to Allah the Almighty Who blessed you with a fine hand you have shown here...A delicious languor to steal over in the languid twilight upon the meadow...imagistic!

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Tabasom Azadee 25 February 2014

very good your attention are to important thing

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Valsa George 25 February 2014

Wonderful.... got the aroma and coolness of a 'bubbly bubble bath'! But the serenity and soothing ecstasy achieved by being in communion with that supreme power is no match to any other relaxation technique! ! Love the diction and the inimitable way, the truth is presented! ! Kudos!

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Soulful Heart 24 February 2014

Hey thats fatastic......so unique in tantalising our curiosity to wait for yhe next therapy. Yet the final universal therapy of submitting urself to that supreme one....such bliss to find in ur words....great way of putting it..

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Eeshah Raaziah Naqavi 23 February 2014

Such a beautiful and absorbing piece of poetry! I loved reading it too! Zaynub, I must say, you're a jewel in the world of poets! Keep it up and high! :)

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