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A truly stunning meditation piece. A feast for the senses. And closing with meditating on Oneness is divine. Excellent write. Thoroughly enjoyed (and meditated on) every line. Thank you so much for the wonderful experience. A Perfect 10!
...........a soothing piece..............I can smell the lavender scent, and feel the rose petals......lovely write..........
hey S., i saw this poem mentioned in your comment to '20 little angels'. i wonder what artificial tranquilizers are. have you thought about opening a spa? ? ? sounds like you have some good ideas here. thanks for sharing. bri ;)
A fine poem of pattern type where the river of life drips down and flows on in to spiritual unification.Very inspiring.
Very well written. Love the details. Imagery is always my favorite. well done. =D
Zaynub, stay grateful to Allah the Almighty Who blessed you with a fine hand you have shown here...A delicious languor to steal over in the languid twilight upon the meadow...imagistic!
Wonderful.... got the aroma and coolness of a 'bubbly bubble bath'! But the serenity and soothing ecstasy achieved by being in communion with that supreme power is no match to any other relaxation technique! ! Love the diction and the inimitable way, the truth is presented! ! Kudos!
Hey thats fatastic......so unique in tantalising our curiosity to wait for yhe next therapy. Yet the final universal therapy of submitting urself to that supreme one....such bliss to find in ur words....great way of putting it..
Such a beautiful and absorbing piece of poetry! I loved reading it too! Zaynub, I must say, you're a jewel in the world of poets! Keep it up and high! :)
in the aromatic incenses of oils and essential oils Bathe in breathtaking joy......amusing expression. A beautiful poem is so nicely and incisively delineated. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.