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this poem says to me, , that we dont take lufe seriously enough, we look past problems instead of work them out.. We are narrow minded when going through this journey called life..We should open our minds to whats going on around us. Brittany Pretlow10 minutes ago this is a very deep and real poem, it can speak to so many people and help them better themselves and their way of thinking.. you have a true talent

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Think about many attempts that has met with failure Edward Wahbe7 minutes ago It is essential to seize the opportunity SOUNDS LIKE A WISE MAN PREACHING, GETS BORING Even though it may not be in conformity With your thinking or ideals But it is right choice to try as real

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Tomorrow shall never come Plan for today and welcome