Seize The Chance Comments

Wonderful piece elegantly brought forth in persuasive poetic expressions from the heart. Great lines. You are very talented.

Whether we habitually waste time through careless idleness or intentional procrastination, it's one of the hardest habits to break, and also one of the most destructive. What is more valuable to mere mortals, none of whom can predict the number of their days? Yes, the leanness of your assertive directives seems justifiable.

This is a Great Poem because there is a great spirit behind it. The spirit is yours and you can take pride in it, not vanity but pride. We must take what we are given and make something of it. Despair is understandable but unacceptable. This is a poem by as fighter for justice. You know you are expressing what are at best half truths, but you have faith in that measure of truth and are making a f-u-t-u-r-e from it. I hope you have a huge circle of friends who share your values. We need poems like this to raise our spirits and make our work of rescuing the world from its broken state a joyous task. I just thought id this: A poem like this one is not realistic or unrealistic; it is an ACT OF GOOD. Jesus said, Better to light one candle than curse the darkness. This poem is one of those candles! !

seize the chance feelings, Grasp the moment, fear no longer Time will never wait.. Don't let the moment fly away A great poem of determination You will become a great poetess. at such a young age of 21 you are writing such beautiful poem filled with great thoughts. Thank you. Wish you well to become great as you teach us in this poem . tony

A nice work done by u..... I strongly like these lines..... Grasp the moment, fear no longer Waiting won't make you stronger Chase that hope, chase this dream No matter how hard it might seem

I do reshape and rearrange my verses when friends propose me a better wording, or when- by the time- I think of one better one.In most of my publishings I do appeal to friends to propose me suggestions they think could with another wording give to the text a better shape.Do the same.

Ιn an environment bejond ulterior motives a free soul tries to fulfil the target of its existence: be loved since it loves too.In the most honest words without prejudices or feelings of social restrictions dares to apply directly the satisfaction of the core of our existence: Love. A lesson of freedom.