Seesaw Comments

The pleasure of riding a seesaw is expressed so marvellously. the happiness of those children feels too close to catch as there is no gap left between the merriment of reading this poem and riding a seesaw... thank you.

favorite lines: ‘Free of tensions free of pains, Free of guilt free of stains, ” and “Merely a friendship or a love at this age? What next when youth comes out of the cage! ” For over 50 years I’ve been out of my ‘cage’, AND I’m stained! ! I’d rather be back in my cage, as long as I could stay there forever! ! :) bri p.s. I enjoyed your rhymes!

Too young to love but not too young to adore. All of us have gone through this stage, - a 10 Free of guilt free of stains

A wonderful poem...........................10

What is next when youth is out of its cage, is quite possibly a pulled muscle or injured back.: -)

The entire poem is a great pleasure to read. It brings out the innocence of childhood and a bit of their psychology. But the best of that part of life is reflected in the following lines: Free of tensions free of pains, Free of guilt free of stains,

Lovely poem like the lovely kids on the seesaw! The simple pleasures of innocent childhood captured beautifully! A 10