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Beautiful and I believe it's reality. Good luck dear poet.

Beautiful poem, very meaningful and poignant.

nicely penned composition 10+++

a bit of fuzziness adds to the charm of yer poem.... the silent scream, the hopes dashed on far off shores. loves ceaseless perpetuation....with the same nagging suffering...well presented ***

Love is where there is no pain, beatiful poem, i loved it.

One kiss from her mouth, a waft of wind from her hair or a life without it... I'll never have (City of Angels)

Hmmm need a handkerchiefs? we all here to share and wipe your tears...or maybe just need a big towel hahaha joking! Elena, in this new poem you are making new shape of poetry that you rarely done and the result was awesome...feelings is there, emotion is bolder, idea even thicker....very nice...But hey Stop letting pain taking over you, just let strength be your bones and fight everything.....the rest just tease and leave them...keep strnger! _Unwritten Soul

this sounds sad, which made my heart up-side-down from the bounce! nice work, Elena

A solitary walk along the strands can drive all pain away and when heart is filled with love, we feel we are in wondrous lands! ! A nice poem! Thanks Elena..... Where were you all these days? I missed you a lot!