Friday, July 19, 2019

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At sunrise she walked up to a police officer and cautiously asked, " Sir, I'm looking for the train station, to leave this disheartening place, do you know the way? "
The large, stoic cop looked upon her and replied, " You ask me about the Way. I answer you: you know the way, it's written upon the heart."
With that, he was gone.
She felt the fog of uncertainty. The early morning mist covered all seen.
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Anil Kumar Panda 08 November 2019

It makes a very interesting reading. Don't like to miss a line. So good. Thanks for sharing. Loved it.

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Glen Kappy 08 September 2019

Hey, Smoky! Reading this and seeing the date it was posted makes me realize how infrequently I’ve been in PH and how long it’s been since I’ve checked on what you’ve been up to with your writing. As to this, it feels like it’s from a dream. Planned or not, it’d be hard to come up with better images than “the train whistle... as if a song of longing” and “she gazed out the window of the past.” Hoping you’re well, Glen

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Jazib Kamalvi 21 August 2019

such a nice piece of work, Smoky Hoss. You may like to read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Paul Brookes 21 July 2019

Great write feeling depth a story deep and yet uplifting enjoyed

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Lawerence Mize 20 July 2019

A little snippet of thought of food for the mind. Enjoyed the imagery in this one Smoky. Good read.

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