Seeking With The Desire To Die Comments

sylvia plath said that nature is so valuble to peotic youngsters. thats true and you have exploited it very well in bending nature into tenebrous and ghoulish imagery. i do think it is written symbolically with plenty inbetween the lines though it is clear to everybody still. it might suit the dark nature of the poem abit more if it had greater levels of ambiguity and uncertainty, making it more esoteric as it were! but thats only my opinion. nice stuff. -M

It's very beautiful. It's very in reading when you wrote Seek: search for the rain you once sought. Different hidden meanings in different views

This is a really good peom, always seek more in your heart, mind, or surroundings. Other than that good poem