Sanity...
Where's the life you promised me
All your "I love yous"
left on my window sill
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A poem written in quest of sanity, rings a bell in the readers' mind. Fluent flow of words and a touch of solemnity with the urge for sanity makes the poem worthy of several readings and recitations. Very well done, Susan! Loved reading your poem.
Yeah, when nothing goes well in life such type of feelings come to mind. One seeks elusive peace in different things. This poem speaks of the heartache you are going through. Very nicely crafted to make it interesting reading and the readers can feel your heart reading this.10++
Sanity...Lost in the songs you sang to me…..What a thoughtful write! Nicely penned. Thank you for sharing, Susan.10+
" God grant me sanity" is the focus of my interest. In this day and time, He is the only supply of sanity.