Wednesday, April 25, 2007

Seeking Metaphor Comments

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Metaphor’s the soul of poetry:
this incongruous instrument of speech
with which we say one thing,
when we mean quite another:
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Michael Shepherd
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What a gracefully flowing, packed piece M. I'm in love with the last stanza, in particular: I find it wonderfully inspiring and memorable. Thank you for this. It is a true piece of artistry. t x

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Amanda Lukas 25 April 2007

Quite thoughtful. All this talk about metaphors leaves me craving more poetry, more metaphors.

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Scarlett Treat 25 April 2007

Leave it to Danny to find the 'play on words' that he does so well...but as for myself, I love that one line...'time lifted to the timeless.' That, to me, contains the relevance of our writing..to take time and lift it into something for the ages... yes, a 'thoughtshift.' Perfect wording, IMHO. Scarlett

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Archie Langford 25 April 2007

When I was in engineeringI was often asked 'What do you want that metalfor'? a.l

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David Taylor 25 April 2007

Metaphor is not comparison it is revealing the same oneness in all. A metaphor is a lifting of a veil that said there was ever any difference there at all!

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Danny Reynolds 25 April 2007

In Glezga, its a stranger. Sumbiddy ye've never metaphor.

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