Seeking Enlightenment Comments
We're walking together, there's a mention of weather,
But the subject quickly changes to 'Why';
And while we are walking, I'm doing all the talking,
Desperately trying to coax a reply
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the eternal question, the endless pursuit, of seeking and finding a silent wall, portrayed with great subtlety!
'But what can I say now, I'm walking away now, The river has started to freeze; I head back to my cave, which becomes my grave, And my solitude turns into peace, ' I haven't read verses so deep and meaningful for quite some ages. An excellent poem that deserves 10/10 right away.
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8/2/2025 9:07:26 AM # 1.0.0
Great innerweaving of rhyme at mid sentence, remindful of Poe. -Very important subject matter. A strong, firm write that has me thinking. I am always on the good rhyme side