Seeing You Comments

cool poem :) keep up the good work! ! :)

Wow! this piece reminds of my ex-wife meeting me on payday (I call her, 'the devil's daughter') well penned, letting your true feeling out, keep it up! 10+++

A great poem my friend, you expressed your feelings towards 'her' in a nice way. Good Job..keep it up :) Merna

owwwwwwww..i hope ur dreams will be all fine...nice piece..smileeee

good write my friend another beautiful poem....thanks for sharing