Seeing you, my reluctant muse, has restored me once again
You remembered the day we met and i took you home in the rain
on your birthday and we found ourselves in eachother
In the morning with our coffee and tangerines, walking to the beach
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I think you succeed in sharing what you want to in this poem. I found the flashback section very effective. I felt a little confused in the 'birthday' and 'set me free' lines, as to the time line of partings & reunions.