Wednesday, November 1, 2017

Seeing Through The Snow At Night Comments

Rating: 4.7

Snow fell in a thicket of white,
melted in rivulets along the outside
of a bistro window, framing the image of ‘us.'
I glanced up into whiskey eyes
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Jette Blackstone
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Rebecca Navarre 25 March 2018

Very Beautifully Woven On A Warm Winters Night! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Ever So Very Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Susan Williams 03 December 2017

So beautifully romantic... wow! ! ! glanced up into whiskey eyes and lost perspective.- -don't you just love it when that happens and everything just goes lovey and dovey and a look just melts you! ! ! Wonderful poem! ! ! 10++++

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Jette Blackstone 05 December 2017

Thank you Susan. I was so taken by Frosini's poem I decided I need to create something dreamy and romantic...and pretty. Honestly, these Midwestern winters can be challenging...this poem just lightens everything...the poem is especially apropos in mid January through mid February. Anyways, thank you! :)

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Yiyan Han 15 November 2017

Wonderful singing love poem...good work done!

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Jette Blackstone 05 December 2017

Thank you so much for your kind comments on my love poem. I appreciate you taking the time to read it.

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Stacy Geena 10 November 2017

I loved your poem. Fantastic writing.

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Jette Blackstone 05 December 2017

Thank you so much Stacy.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 November 2017

beautiful imagery it snows here wowly every night I see through my windows glass it appears so soft like white grass and when i go off to sleep I see white ghosts only And I appear to be scared I wake up my spouse help I can't sleep warm me and she obliges

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Jette Blackstone 07 November 2017

Thanks so much for your lovely comments. It's always nice to have a special person who loves you to help one sleep and stay warm through all the snow. Take care.

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Barry Stebbings 02 November 2017

Snow is always such a romantic theme. I think because it comes at a time of hope and promise. Nicely written.

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Jette Blackstone 07 November 2017

Nice observation Barry. You are so right. The early snows anyways, always evoke those kinds of feelings within me. Take care.

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Fabrizio Frosini 02 November 2017

''the warm lip of our aspirations'' truly a nice poem, dear Jette :) and I'm happy to know that 'Nocturnal Snowing' inspired you to write such piece of 'pure romance'!

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Jette Blackstone 07 November 2017

How could that poem of yours not inspire one to write and reflect on the positives within the human experience? Thanks so much for commenting and reading Fabrizio. :)

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Paul Brookes 02 November 2017

An incredibly sensuous poem we fall into the the poets embrace particularly liked I glanced up into whiskey eyes and lost perspective Great piece

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Jette Blackstone 07 November 2017

Thanks Paul. I love eyes the color of whiskey....more than the whiskey! But whiskey makes sense in a poem that takes place in winter and a cold snow.

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