Snow fell in a thicket of white,
melted in rivulets along the outside
of a bistro window, framing the image of ‘us.'
I glanced up into whiskey eyes
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So beautifully romantic... wow! ! ! glanced up into whiskey eyes and lost perspective.- -don't you just love it when that happens and everything just goes lovey and dovey and a look just melts you! ! ! Wonderful poem! ! ! 10++++
Thank you Susan. I was so taken by Frosini's poem I decided I need to create something dreamy and romantic...and pretty. Honestly, these Midwestern winters can be challenging...this poem just lightens everything...the poem is especially apropos in mid January through mid February. Anyways, thank you! :)
Thank you so much for your kind comments on my love poem. I appreciate you taking the time to read it.
beautiful imagery it snows here wowly every night I see through my windows glass it appears so soft like white grass and when i go off to sleep I see white ghosts only And I appear to be scared I wake up my spouse help I can't sleep warm me and she obliges
Thanks so much for your lovely comments. It's always nice to have a special person who loves you to help one sleep and stay warm through all the snow. Take care.
Snow is always such a romantic theme. I think because it comes at a time of hope and promise. Nicely written.
Nice observation Barry. You are so right. The early snows anyways, always evoke those kinds of feelings within me. Take care.
''the warm lip of our aspirations'' truly a nice poem, dear Jette :) and I'm happy to know that 'Nocturnal Snowing' inspired you to write such piece of 'pure romance'!
How could that poem of yours not inspire one to write and reflect on the positives within the human experience? Thanks so much for commenting and reading Fabrizio. :)
An incredibly sensuous poem we fall into the the poets embrace particularly liked I glanced up into whiskey eyes and lost perspective Great piece
Thanks Paul. I love eyes the color of whiskey....more than the whiskey! But whiskey makes sense in a poem that takes place in winter and a cold snow.
Very Beautifully Woven On A Warm Winters Night! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Ever So Very Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++