Monday, October 3, 2005

Seeing The Edges, Of Dad. Comments

Rating: 4.5

ROAMING free, in a spell bound
dream, there are snakes here,
dangerous snakes, and the isolation,
of a drunken king, one man grapples,
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DAVID GERARDINO
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Wanda Swim Strunk 03 October 2005

I think this is your best yet. I like the lyrical style of it.

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Allan James Saywell 03 October 2005

IT'S GREAT MATE, A DEEP READ WITH A EDGE LIKE A SWORD REGARDS ALLAN

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Kelly Allen Vinal 03 October 2005

Goodness, this is powerful. Loved the last part best: -)

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