Friday, November 9, 2012

Seeing Red Comments

Rating: 4.1

She wakes, with hot emotion streaming
warm and wet, across one rosy cheek.
Slowly reason rises, tears subside,
for many times does bitter obligation
...
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Maggie Munro
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Terry O'leary 26 November 2012

Sad, sensuous, with a touch of hope? Nery nice... Terry

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Owain Glyn 21 November 2012

Good stuff, but if it wasn't for the ordinary there could be no extraordinary!

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Indranil Bhaduri 15 November 2012

Beautiful, sensual and strong...Loved it.

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Lyn Paul 09 November 2012

Emotions described so well. Perfect

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