Friday, April 11, 2008

Seeing Once Again How I Saw Then(For Lyn) Comments

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I put this window in
with my Dad

(well, I …helped him) .
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Dónall Dempsey
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Original Unknown Girl 11 April 2008

Everything you write seems so effortless... I adore reading your poems Donall, it's like a light showering of confetti petals, only in words instead! HG: -) xx

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Scarlett Treat 11 April 2008

And what a man the child became...a poetry writing fool! But I think this one needs a check-up on the section about the window falling on your foot? Why did your dad curse when it was YOU who was hurt? That bit confused me...but then, I am easily confused.

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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