Tuesday, May 13, 2008

Seeing Beyond... Comments

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Caught in a vicious circle,
In the circle of life
Like sands that dance to the tune of winds
Often we go, with the known
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V F 21 May 2008

i liked this poem very much.. especially the way it ended.. great!

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 16 May 2008

The beauty and wonders everywhere................but elusive.we have to do penance to get those.good poem

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Kristy Artmann 13 May 2008

I like your poem; it has a nice flow to it. ~Kristy~

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Raveendran . 13 May 2008

This poem speaks well of spirituality and spiritually guided love for existence

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Howard Johnson 13 May 2008

A deep emotionaly filled write.thank you for sharing, Shrishti

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Howard Johnson 13 May 2008

A deep emotionaly filled write.thank you for sharing, Shrishti

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Howard Johnson 13 May 2008

A deep emotionaly filled write.thank you for sharing, Shrishti

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Kesav Easwaran 13 May 2008

a good poem this...keep writting, shrishti!

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