Seeing Beyond… Comments

very true..the capabilities they have is immense...it's all written within not in words

This is such an interesting subject, if never to have had sight, all the senses would compensate, and I would think become more intuitive and receptive to feelings and vibrations. So the mind would have to work to decipher it all, thus heightening its sense also.....10

You always penned with brilliance, sir. Disabled people are more sensitive to the plight of others..to his environment and more talented, for they cultivate and nurture their sleeping gifts to excel...a perfect composition.

This poem is amazingly conceived and thank you very much for posting it.

The wall enables the writing, each eternally dependent to be known, but never known to the one who is proverbially blind, one who sees only the darker side of things, negatively, all knowing through heresay, he does not wish to acknowledge what is made available to him for he has the insight to see even beyond for he relies on his soul's judgement. Beautiful work which is thought provoking. Kesav, all 10.

How many in this material world can see things beyond certain level? It requires a broader vision and a spiritual outlook. You have touched this point in this poem well.

Both brightness and darkness have significance when seen through the eternal windowpanes of the soul. A beautiful poem, Ten for you. Always your friend, Sandra

a mystical element in there...to go beyond and reach out to visions of the third eye.. a metaphysical effect there which definitely lets me read beyond the boundaries of any physical/non physical wall

A lovely piece. I agree with Peerbocus...this poem has all necessary elements of a great poem...10

Seeing walls writing on stone blue chalk white ink fingers run over picking meaning in colours unreavealed transcends mortal experience beyond mere walls into eternal spaces the colour of love Kesav, your writing does so much to me, as you can see. It breaks down the walls around me and lights up unseen sapces unknown to me - till i read you.

what would it be when someone walks away knowing your thoughts and words beyond you.....................it could be heart break though! hey kesav your thought is far from over.................a splendid 10 and A Grade!

somehow i read it as a metaphysical poem...of the supraconscience...

yes seening beyond that wall --6th sense great write kesav ++10 as always regards anjali

Only few people on this earth see beyond.Added 10 to this.

Seeing beyond - a mistic experience!

The theme.......is nice...narrative......though...perhaps long

Seeing is the power of eyes.But vision is beyond. Subject is very good.But it became very narrative.

vision is the art of seeing the invisible. sixth sense, mind's eye. i used to work with the sightless, they are far more perceptive. great composition, very effective presentation.10

Outwardly blind, yet the minds eye sees all that is sought.. What a creative piece here Kesav.. one that leaves this reader.. looking both inside and outside the box.. We are only limited to what we limit ourselves.. My big 10

Keshavji, sure you are beyond the SOUL!