She will always wash her tiny feet in a pail by the door
Crystal waters instantly turn to muddy chocolate swirls
A bucket of thrilling delight from the wells icey surprise
Contrasting with her hot sweaty mess of tangled wild hair
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A joy to read, great imagery, love and bonding through the wonderment of seeds, lovely piece Edmund!
A prayer of life and joy is held lightly in their happy hands...beautiful. This poem with its lovely imagery fills the heart with hope n delight. A pretty picture of life n happiness you have created here. And the beauty of mother daughter relation is depicted so well. We can always plant new hopes..the seeds hold a promise of fruition and fulfillment. Lovely piece of writing.
A nice and fantastic poem with lively imagery and what an ending! The concluding line speaks volumes.
I felt the sheer joy of being as I read this poem. It is a delightful read.The imagery is exquisite Edmund. I so love your poetry. This is definitely a favourite